22 Words

Exercises in getting to the point (or avoiding it) by saying what I have to say in twenty-two words, not counting titles.

Archive for Brevity

On average, web users read almost 100% of a page’s content only if it is 25 words or less.

The following chart shows the maximum amount of text users could read during an average visit to pages with different word counts.

-Jakob Nielsen


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(via Josh Sowin)

Perfect clarity is unattainable: Brevity is inadequate, but more ink won’t necessarily help.

Admission: Twenty-two words isn’t enough to be completely clear.

Defense: No matter how much an author writes, there will still be misunderstanding.

Good writing is about value not brevity. But brevity helps if you’re not a genius.

Gifted writers make each sentence propel readers to the next.

Another strategy is to just finish before readers have time to quit.

If this doesn’t motivate me to be concise, I’m regarding myself too highly.

Consider when editing yourself:

Even a fool who keeps silent is considered wise; when he closes his lips, he is deemed intelligent. (Proverbs 17:2 8)

Say it and be done.

If you feel tempted to promise your audience that you’ll be brief, then your content probably warrants that you keep your word.

Advice to pastors from a pastor: Be sure you can preach briefly before preaching at length.

One minister suggests writing sermons as concise as Lincoln at Gettysburg.

Extra words will be added only to … enhance those 279 words.

This blog inspired my wife to come up with a great new name for a daughter.

Molly invented a girl name she thought I’d like:

Breva Dee.

But now she says we can’t ever use it. What gives?

Concision doesn’t impair importance.

The most important claim in Scripture—what all the rest of the Bible must be founded on—is the shortest: “I AM.”

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